You backed up your supporting points really well with examples. That's something I need to do better in my piece. I'm assuming you're going to use more sources than Dennis Largey in the long-run, right? Sometimes when I'm reading someone's work and there's only a small line-up of references, I become skeptical. (That being said, I didn't even list references in the draft I posted, so. Props for doing that... :///)
I'm wondering whom your argument is directed to? But also assuming it is as you state: educational boards of religious schools...primarily Latter-day Saint. In your thesis, maybe specify that "Latter-day Saint run private schools, and charter schools, should have the Book of Mormon TAUGHT AS LITERATURE as an option for an English course...." Not just a "Book of Mormon" course. We have access to lots of those. :)
(Sorry I had to write it in all caps. I don't know how else to emphasize it. I'm not yelling, I swear.)
You backed up your supporting points really well with examples. That's something I need to do better in my piece. I'm assuming you're going to use more sources than Dennis Largey in the long-run, right? Sometimes when I'm reading someone's work and there's only a small line-up of references, I become skeptical.
ReplyDelete(That being said, I didn't even list references in the draft I posted, so. Props for doing that... :///)
I'm wondering whom your argument is directed to? But also assuming it is as you state: educational boards of religious schools...primarily Latter-day Saint. In your thesis, maybe specify that "Latter-day Saint run private schools, and charter schools, should have the Book of Mormon TAUGHT AS LITERATURE as an option for an English course...." Not just a "Book of Mormon" course. We have access to lots of those. :)
(Sorry I had to write it in all caps. I don't know how else to emphasize it. I'm not yelling, I swear.)
Such an interesting argument. Really.