I immensely enjoyed reading your draft. In fact, it seemed like a polished, finished paper to me! Your thesis is brilliant, your ideas, quotes, and inferences perfectly supportive, your flow was natural and logical. You chose an excellent device to focus on-- cage symbolism and imagery-- and you clearly have put the work, though, and research into your topic! I've always loved Jane Eyre, but you are helping me see why!
I have no suggestions. All I can repeat is: bravo!
Bravo! And bravo again!
ReplyDeleteI immensely enjoyed reading your draft. In fact, it seemed like a polished, finished paper to me! Your thesis is brilliant, your ideas, quotes, and inferences perfectly supportive, your flow was natural and logical. You chose an excellent device to focus on-- cage symbolism and imagery-- and you clearly have put the work, though, and research into your topic! I've always loved Jane Eyre, but you are helping me see why!
I have no suggestions. All I can repeat is: bravo!
Yeah that was really well written and the quotes were very supportive. Good job!
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